Development of local businesses in small towns.

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Discuss how big corporations influence the development of local businesses in small towns.

Ensure your paragraphs are well structured (topic sentence, explanation, synthesis of evidence)(check attachment)

Should be in essay form (Introduction, body, conclusion)

APA | 400 words |

ZERO PLAGIARISM | EXCELLENT GRAMMAR

Here is how to build your arguments effectively (I will use the argument that social media does not portray body language thus impedes real communication to illustrate what I mean in each point)

Each paragraph should contain,

1. a)A TOPIC SENTENCE.It is a general statement of the subject of a paragraph/the point you intend to talk about in the paragraph.

Example: Social media cannot portray body language thus it is unable to send the right message

1. b)AN EXPLANATION OF THE “WHY” OF THE ARGUMENT:

Example: communication over social media impedes real communication BECAUSE it communicates a small percentage of the intended message.

1. c)EVIDENCE (THIS IS RESEARCH YOU HAVE GATHERED FROM SOURCES).Example: Per studies, verbal communication forms only 7% of communication while non verbal makes up 93% of communication (Mark 20)..

1. d)SYNTHESIS OF EVIDENCE (INTERPRETING WHAT THE EVIDENCE YOU HAVE CITED MEANS):

EXAMPLE: Therefore, when using social media, the receiver does not receive a significant portion of the message, thus the sender may not be able to detect a lie.

1. e)GIVE AN EXAMPLE WHENEVER POSSIBLE.

EXAMPLE: for example, New York Times reported the story of a student who committed suicide a few days after having what appeared to be a joyful communication with her mother and friends. Upon questioning fellow students, they said they had noticed a change in behavior in the student, that she had grown unhappy and withdrawn.

1. f)TIE THE EXAMPLE TO THE ARGUMENT OF THE PARAGRAPH:

Example: Had the parent and friends communicated with the student face to face, chances are they would have noticed unusual behavior and prodded the student to speak up on what was wrong.

How such a paragraph would look like in prose:

Social media cannot portray body language thus it is unable to send the right message. Communication over social media impedes real communication because it communicates a small percentage of the intended message. Per studies, verbal communication forms only 7% of communication while nonverbal communication makes up 93% of communication (Mark 20). Therefore, when using social media, the receiver does not receive a significant portion of the message, thus the sender may not be able to detect a lie. For example, New York Times reported the story of a student who committed suicide a few days after having what appeared to be a joyful communication with her mother and friends. Upon questioning fellow students, they said they had noticed a change in behavior in the student, that she had grown unhappy and withdrawn. Had the parent and friends communicated with the student face to face, chances are they would have noticed unusual behavior and prodded the student to speak up on what was wrong.

Clarifications:

• One topic. Note that the paragraph explains ONLY ONE POINT/TOPIC: i.e “Social media cannot portray body language thus it is unable to send the right message.” A paragraph should not have more than one point/topic.
• While the paragraph has only one piece of EVIDENCE, it does not mean you cannot give more than 1 piece of evidence.
• You do not have to back all evidence with examples, as long as you explain it and cite it. Just have an example or more in your papers, when applicable.
• The first and last sentences of a paragraph should NOT have citations.