Hi I have completed 3 charts in which my teacher provided me with feedback. If you can take this feedback and help me write the paper that would be amazing, thank you.
I have also attached a rubric and the Short story needed to complete this assignment. It is worth 20% of my over all mark.
Its a personal essay but also a critical analysis
Feedback: Overall Feedback
Thank you for your submission, Kristina.
This is a good start!
Some editing suggestions:
– review MLA formatting guidelines for in-text citations, and remember that you will need a Works Cited listing
– maintain a formal, third person point of view (no “I” or “you”)
– in your opening statement and concluding paragraph, aim to establish context and relevance outside the text itself
– thesis and directional statements must be two distinct sentences – thesis must outline your central argument and contain the author’s name and title, and directional statement must outline your supporting arguments
– be conscious of repetition within your opening paragraph .. only state your argument once
– I would advise reviewing MLA formatting guidelines for page and paragraph layout before you proceed with your writing process
All the best with your ongoing studies.
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